Vision
Reena’s Exploration Challenge #65
Cinquain (2 – 4 – 6 – 8 – 2) syllables
Wonder
living earth source
vision of olden days
beneath concrete, asphalt and steel
marvel
©Hélène Vaillant
Willow Poetry
Hélène Vaillant
Reena’s Exploration Challenge #65
Cinquain (2 – 4 – 6 – 8 – 2) syllables
Wonder
living earth source
vision of olden days
beneath concrete, asphalt and steel
marvel
©Hélène Vaillant
very well done!
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Thank you so much.
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my pleasure! 🙂
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😊
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Spot on!
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Thank you Sadje. 😊
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You’re welcome
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.
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Thank you Reena for the reblog.
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Excellent! In the picture, it actually looks like a marvel.
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Happy you I am so glad you liked it Reena. Cinquain does not leave much room for a whole story. It was enough room for this one though.
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Agree. Formats restrict us in so many ways, at times.
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Yes, what lies hidden or forgotten, wonderful
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So much lies forgotten and hidden Paul. Thanks for reading and your comment. Much appreciated.
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Pleasure
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I love this! such a subtle reflection on “progress” !
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It is Sgeoil, I keep wondering what our future holds!
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I wonder too!
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So true – well done.
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Thanks V.J. 😊
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Ahhh…there really is abetter world out there.
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Always is a better world depending on our perspective, there can be darkness and one will see the light. Thank you for your comment.
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Superb!
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Thanks, Eugenia.
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You’re welcome.
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Gteat cinquan, Hélène! I just love the pivtures you find too! 💗
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Thank you, this is Reena’s picture for the prompt. I love it too.
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