My first time writing Etheree Poetry – Syllabic Pattern: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10, Rhyme: None not sure if I did this right…helpful comments appreciated.


selfsame twins,
fragile physique,
uniquely challenged;
family suffering
poverty, gifted two flutes;
dormant adeptness surfaced,
abundant richness imbue the hearth,
the world’s treasures alive within their hearts.

Hélène Vaillant©

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27 thoughts on “Sisters

  1. Helene, you got me started on it, and then I could not stop. It was four o’clock in the morning lol. I LOVED dling them. They are fascinating. Thanks for yours and for introducing me to them. When I tried doing one, it was releasing for me, and I wrote very differently. I like!

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