18 thoughts on “Tanka – Departure

  1. Emotionally packed poem. I think the haiku and tanka force every word and syllable to count making the emotion concentrated. Great use of the form and excellent word selection. That said I’m saddened to hear about your husband.

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  2. Pingback: Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 98, “Sad & Write,” #SynonymsOnly | Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer

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