8 thoughts on “Tanka – Penitent”

1. Joss says:

   January 18, 2017 at 1:09 PM

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   your words, always pull me into that world that is All.

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   • Hélène/Mother Willow says:

     January 18, 2017 at 1:23 PM

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     Thank you Joss. So happy you are here. I am smiling.

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     • Joss says:

       January 18, 2017 at 1:28 PM

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       I can feel your smile across the miles!

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2. Cheryl-Lynn says:

   January 19, 2017 at 10:49 AM

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   Lovely tanka…in 5 lines you have told a very beautiful story!

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   • Hélène/Mother Willow says:

     January 19, 2017 at 10:57 AM

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     Thank you Cheryl-Lynn

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     • Cheryl-Lynn says:

       January 19, 2017 at 11:15 AM

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       🙂

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3. Janice says:

   January 19, 2017 at 6:24 PM

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   I particularly like the way you open: ‘unbeknownst to him’

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   • Hélène/Mother Willow says:

     January 19, 2017 at 9:07 PM

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     Thank you Janice

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