Haiku – Mixing It Up

“Mixing It Up”

What is meant here is mixing up the action so the reader does not know if nature is doing the acting or if a human is doing it.

color painting fence
flowers heavy from rainstorm
bending awkwardly

 

Hélène/Mother Willow ©

 

 

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