Tanka – Low Sunlight

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your enchanting smile
from across the quiet meadow
your resolved step towards me
in shadow of willow tree
you took me passionately

 

Hélène/Mother Willow©

 

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor: prompt –  low sunlight

7 thoughts on “Tanka – Low Sunlight

  1. A real tanka in which I find a lot of the two techniques we have had already, but what I like the most in this tanka is the strong sensuality / sexuality in it. A real love-poem.

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